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storyThrough the TunnelAnthony Browne.notebook

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Good Morning!

Please solve this...


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Answer Time!

If 8 cans cost £4.80, one can will be £0.60 and two cans will be £1.20.

£3.60 £1.20 = £2.40. So, three cakes will be £2.40, which means one cake will be £0.80.


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Handwriting Time!

Balanced

Argument

Persuasive

Powerful


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https://www.bbc.co.uk/education/clips/zm3nvcw

What is a balanced argument?

https://www.bbc.co.uk/education/clips/zm3nvcw


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LOTo read the opening of a story and consider what action a character should take next.

To gathering arguments for or against a particular action.


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Features of a textpresent tenseabstract nounsthird personlogical connectivescomplex sentences

truth, justice, concern, reason,despair, belief, possibility

Things that you can not see ortouch:

because, therefore, however

scientific evidence

facts and figures


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Look at the cover and make some predictions.

What will the story be about?


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Should Rosie follow him into the tunnel?

1. Arguments for following him

2. Arguments against following him

Write a list of arguments for and against!


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Good Morning!



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Answer Time!

Aeroplanes: 10 x £12 = £120Toy trains: 30 x £23 = £690Teddies: 15 x £8 = £120

Total: £930.


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Spelling Time!

Please ask an a family member to test you on last week's, then learn these please:


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DiscussionHave you included these key features in your discussion?

Title

IntroductionWhat is your discussion

about

ParagraphsGive all the reasons for and against. Don't take sides.

Conclusionsummarise the key points, what do you think of the

issue.

Present tense Topic WordsFormal

Writing style

Facts and Examples

Third PersonGive reasons and examples

For and against.


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Features of argument text

present tenseabstract nounsthird personlogical connectivescomplex sentences

truth, justice, concern, reason,despair, belief, possibility

Things that you can not see ortouch:

because, therefore, however

scientific evidence

facts and figures


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Some important discussion conventions to remember!

Don't take sides - saywhat "people" think

Some people say...Others argue...Brothers would claim that...Sisters reply...Keep it balanced, e.g.

On the one hand...On the other hand...

Don't be too definite- use conditionals

It could be claimed...This might mean...possibly perhaps

Remember it is third person, not I think


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Planning our writingBefore we can start to think about writing our introduction, we need to have planned out our for and against arguments in a skeleton.

Introduction

Point 1 -for/against

Point 2 - for/against

Point 3 - for/against

Conclusion

statement of issue to be discussed

summary and perhaps a recommendation

point and elaboration within paragraph


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Answers!

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In The tunnel story there are a brother and a sister who are very different to each other. While playing one day, Jack finds a dark tunnel and wants to explore through it. His sister doesn't like the idea so he leaves without her. After waiting a long time, Jack does not return and the dilemma for Rose is whether she should go into the tunnel to find her brother.

Rose and Jack are brother and sister in the story of The Tunnel.When they are playing out one day, Jack decides to explore through a tunnel they find. Rose doesn't want to, so Jack goes without her, but when her brother does not return after a long time she has the dilemma of deciding whether to go after him or not. This discussion will consider the reasons for and against her going after him.

We are now going to start writing our balanced argument about The Tunnel. Here's my introduction above. Now have a go at your own version. Remember:

Present tenseThird personImpartial


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Answer Time!

The answer is D...

A = 1/2

B = 1/4

C = 2/3


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LO: I can write a balanced argument

Now, you have written you have planned your balanced argument and written your introduction, it is time to finish it.

Please see my example and the checklist first...


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Modelled WritingThere are many arguments for and against the girl entering the tunnel. On the one hand, if she loved her brother surely she would have no choice but to go after him. On the other hand however, as he has constantly made her life a misery, she may feel this is the perfect opportunity to get rid of him once and for all.

Many people believe that entering the tunnel would be a serious mistake for the girl. It is well known that dark, old tunnels can be terrifying and dangerous places that should be avoided at all costs. Furthermore...

On the other hand many people may feel that it is essential the girl goes after her brother. After all, they argue that despite his mean attitude towards her, he would surely change it if she went to his rescue. Additionally...

In conclusion there are many arguments for and against the girl entering the tunnel. On balance, I believe...


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Checklist of criteriaCHECKLIST : DISCUSSION

Is there an introduction - statement of the issue to be discussed?

Are the arguments for included?

Are the arguments against included?

Is there a conclusion - summary of discussion?

Is it written in the present tense?

Is it written in the third person?

Are there abstract nouns (things can‛t see or touch) eg. Truth, reason, answer, belief?

Are logical connectives used eg. Therefore, however, consequently etc

Have you included scientific evidence?

Correct punctuation used; capital letters, full stops, commas, ?, “ “, ( ), -


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I hope you enjoyed that Year 4!

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