Karla Valentiner-bohse

Target Mark Comment

Write with appropriate structure and organisation.

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I think that I wrote it very neat and for me that was one of the best speech I have every done.

Use quality openings 1 2 3 4 5

I think that my opening where pretty good because the first two questions were good but my last question was not really in an full sentence.

Use paragraphs effectively

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I think I kind of did a good job on my paragraphs because I did paragraphs and they were in the right once.

Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5

I think that I wrote in details but I think I could explain it a bit more than what I did

Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively

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I think that my argument was pretty good and I knew what I was saying. I also think that I knew it so well that I didn’t need to look at my cue cards.

1. In what way(s) do you think you could have improved the delivery of your speech?

B. Speaking a bit clear and slower also more expression

A. Persuaded more and make my argument more clear

2. After watching everyone’s speech, what were some things that stood out in your mind?

B. That there where many more people who are as nerves as me.

3. How did you prepare for the speech?C. I prepared my speech by reading it out loud to my family,

not just my here my family in Denmark as well.

4. What were two things that you think were ‘fantastic’ about your speech?

b. I loved my argument because when I was reading about the sun it persuade me that is one of the reasons I picked the sun.

a. I also loved how said my speech and the movement I did with my hands.

5. How do you feel about giving speeches?e. I feel pretty good giving speeches but I get very nerves.

b. I think I am good at giving speeches but when ever I did one I feel like I could have done it a bit better.