week 4 informal writing 2
TRANSCRIPT
1
informal letters 2
19th Julyst. hilda’s secondary
tp one: Arman Alluwie
2
3
what we will achieve today• by 9.15am I would have– learnt from my classmates about
informal letter writing–understood the various elements
found in an informal letter
4
examples of letter writing• letters to friends– to ex-classmates– love letters
• letters to teachers• letters to family members• pen pals from overseas• diary• emails
5
• postcards–have a format of it’s own
• “ah long” letters (Wensheng’s)–more of a note
• Whatsapp / SMS (Jerome’s)–discourse of it’s own.. like cya l8 ;)
6
topics to write about• a specific question / topic• past events• relating a personal experience–vacation (Jerome’s)–your life (Bao Zhen’s)–what I did/ how I am doing
7
topics to write about• invitations (Tang Xin’s)• problems at school (Daryl’s)–“hawt” pretty girls
8
making it sound informal• be casual• friendly tone–feelings/ emotions–supporting points/ evidence (Janice’s)
• can be more direct
9
making it sound informal• don’t need to use Sir-s or Mdm-s,
can just write the name (Patricia’s)• informal greeting (eg. Hello)• exchange greetings–ask about person’s well being (Janice)
10
making it sound informal• using exclamation marks (Bao Zhen’s)• hooks (Ting Kang’s)–I look forward to your reply
• using conversational language–slangs in quotations (Ting Kang’s)
11
making it sound informal• informal signature blocks (Bao
Zhen’s)– love, best wishes
12
honor roll
13
• Gabriel Ng• Leonard Tan• Joshua Wong• Jerome Saw
14
informal letters
(paired activity)
15
sample questions• let’s have a look at section 1 of your
worksheets
16
Write a letter to a classmate who met with an accident and has just returned home from hospital. He or she will be recuperating at home for another week. In your letter, you should give the following information, reordering the points and adding other interesting details, where necessary
17
Write a letter to a classmate who met with an accident and has just returned home from hospital. He or she will be recuperating at home for another week. In your letter, you should give the following information, reordering the points and adding other interesting details, where necessary
18
Your cousin has just received his results for the PSLE. Having scored well he has the choice of either entering a premier or neighborhood school. Unable to make a choice, he has written to you to ask for advice. The two schools up for consideration are as follows:
Taking into account your cousin’s personality, capability and family background, suggest one of the two schools to him in order that he might reach his potential in an environment that he can easily thrive in. Your letter should be written in a friendly tone, and set out in clear, accurate English
19
Your cousin has just received his results for the PSLE. Having scored well he has the choice of either entering a premier or neighborhood school. Unable to make a choice, he has written to you to ask for advice. The two schools up for consideration are as follows:
Taking into account your cousin’s personality, capability and family background, suggest one of the two schools to him in order that he might reach his potential in an environment that he can easily thrive in. Your letter should be written in a friendly tone, and set out in clear, accurate English
20
some pointers…• “Use some or all of the following
notes”–not compulsory to use all the points
21
22
some pointers…• Add other information as necessary,
to make your letter an interesting one.• elaboration on points–Equal emphasis on each–Reordering points
23
linking back• group activity–topics to write about–making it sound informal
24
informal letter format• section 2 of the
handout
25
address / date• address–your own
• date–spell out the month fully–write the numerals for the year–eg. 19th July 2011
26
address/ date/ salutation• let’s have a look at section 2.1 of
your worksheets