week 4 informal writing 3

17
one more day to Friday, Thursday 21th July 2011 st. hilda’s secondary tp one: arman alluwie 1

Upload: arman-alluwie

Post on 25-May-2015

538 views

Category:

Education


3 download

TRANSCRIPT

Page 1: Week 4  informal writing 3

1

one more day to Friday, Thursday

21th July 2011st. hilda’s secondary

tp one: arman alluwie

Page 2: Week 4  informal writing 3

2

tuesday’s tales

• on Tuesday we looked at–sample questions–format for informal letter writing–address/ date/ salutation

Page 3: Week 4  informal writing 3

3

questions

• is there a format for writing addresses?• do we leave the full stops/ commas?• how informal should our informal

salutations sound?–appropriateness

Page 4: Week 4  informal writing 3

4

what we will achieve today

• by 9.45am I would have–understood what the introduction,

main body, conclusion and the signature block contains.–practiced writing an informal letter

Page 5: Week 4  informal writing 3

5

introductions

• let’s have a look at section 2.2 of your worksheets• correct the 2nd line of your worksheet–the purpose of the letter–the intentions of the author

Page 6: Week 4  informal writing 3

6

state intentionsI hope this letter finds you well. The letter you wrote me

last week, offering to send me to vacation language school in England, was received with much delight in our household, but none are more excited and thankful than myself. I cannot begin to tell you how delighted I am at the prospect of spending six weeks in England at language school! Thank you for the wonderful offer, Uncle Samuel. Needless to say, I am more than happy to take you up on the generous offer and am writing to tell you that I would be happiest attending the Belleview School in North England for the six-week course.

Page 7: Week 4  informal writing 3

7

exchanging pleasantriesI hope this letter finds you well. The letter you wrote me

last week, offering to send me to vacation language school in England, was received with much delight in our household, but none are more excited and thankful than myself. I cannot begin to tell you how delighted I am at the prospect of spending six weeks in England at language school! Thank you for the wonderful offer, Uncle Samuel. Needless to say, I am more than happy to take you up on the generous offer and am writing to tell you that I would be happiest attending the Belleview School in North England for the six-week course.

Page 8: Week 4  informal writing 3

8

examples of pleasantries• I cannot believe that two weeks have gone by..• Thank you for such a great and wonderful time..• I cannot thank you enough for such a great time

in..• It seems ages since we last saw each other…• Thank you so much for giving me such a

wonderful time..• Thanks a lot for spending time with me..

Page 9: Week 4  informal writing 3

9

what are the two purposes of writing an introduction?

Page 10: Week 4  informal writing 3

10

main body

• organize information• equal elaboration on points• include shared memory–feelings / emotions–using conversational language

Page 11: Week 4  informal writing 3

11

conclusion

• express gratitude• let’s take a look at section 2.3

Page 12: Week 4  informal writing 3

12

conclusionUncle Samuel, thanks again for giving me this

marvellous opportunity. As long as you have no objections, my choice is the Belleview School, and I cannot wait to visit you while I am there! Mum and Dad send all their love, and we would love for you to come to Singapore for a visit with me after the course in England ends. Thanks again Uncle Samuel! Take care and write back soon.

Page 13: Week 4  informal writing 3

13

signature block

• Yours Truly• Yours Affectionately• Love• XOXO

Page 14: Week 4  informal writing 3

14

mental break

Love Language: A Short Film

Page 15: Week 4  informal writing 3

15

stage 2

individual informal letter writing exercise

Page 16: Week 4  informal writing 3

16

this sounds familiar..

Page 17: Week 4  informal writing 3

17

• have I–understood what the introduction,

main body, conclusion and the signature block contains?–practiced writing an informal letter?