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Creating Opportunity Worldwide Pro-ELT Teacher Training Materials You’ve been using a pizza delivery company for 3 years. Yesterday, you ordered 2 pizzas from the company. It took them 55 minutes to deliver the pizza instead of 20 as they advertise, both pizzas were completely cold and one looked as if it was made several days ago. 1. Write an email to a friend who also uses this pizza delivery. Express your feeling in relation to the situation and make some suggestions. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes. Hi John, How’s life? I’d drop a line just to share a feeling of mine, “its frustrated!” Just ordered pizza yesterday and they took an ages to deliver my order. To make it worst, both pizzas were completely cold and one looked as if it was made several days ago. Your friend, Khairul 2. Write an email to the delivery company. Explain your feelings about the situation and give your suggestions. Write 120-150 words. You have 20 minutes. Dear sir/madam, In this e-mail I would like to express my upmost feelings of dissatisfaction towards a poor service I have received from your company. Yesterday I was ordered set of pizzas from your company; unfortunately they took longer time to deliver it to my resident. In addition, pizzas that have been delivered by your staff were completely cold and to make it worst it looked as if/they was/were made several days ago. Above all, no-one took responsibility to sort out this matter in spite of I have been your regular customer for more than five years. I would appreciate if you look into this complain seriously as for me this is a big issue as it represents an image of your company. I would like to suggest that you must make sure your staffs omit the advertisement set by your company to make © The British Council, 2013 The British Council is the United Kingdom's international organisation for cultural relations and education opportunities. British Council Malaysia is a branch (995232-A) of the British Council, registered as a charity in England and Wales (209131) and Scotland (SC037733)

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Creating Opportunity Worldwide

Pro-ELT Teacher Training Materials

Youve been using a pizza delivery company for 3 years. Yesterday, you ordered 2 pizzas from the company. It took them 55 minutes to deliver the pizza instead of 20 as they advertise, both pizzas were completely cold and one looked as if it was made several days ago.

1. Write an email to a friend who also uses this pizza delivery. Express your feeling in relation to the situation and make some suggestions. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

Hi John,Hows life? Id drop a line just to share a feeling of mine, its frustrated! Just ordered pizza yesterday and they took an ages to deliver my order. To make it worst, both pizzas were completely cold and one looked as if it was made several days ago. Your friend,Khairul

2. Write an email to the delivery company. Explain your feelings about the situation and give your suggestions. Write 120-150 words. You have 20 minutes.

Dear sir/madam,

In this e-mail I would like to express my upmost feelings of dissatisfaction towards a poor service I have received from your company. Yesterday I was ordered set of pizzas from your company; unfortunately they took longer time to deliver it to my resident. In addition, pizzas thathave been delivered by your staff were completely cold and to make it worst it looked as if/they was/were made several days ago. Above all, no-one took responsibility to sort out this matter in spite of I have been your regular customer for more than five years.

I would appreciate if you look into this complain seriously as for me this is a big issue as it represents an image of your company. I would like to suggest that you must make sure your staffs omit the advertisement set by your company to make sure that your company image would not have been destroyed by their terrible attitudes.

Yours faithfully,

Khairul Afifi bin Abdullah

The British Council, 2013The British Council is the United Kingdom's international organisation for cultural relations and education opportunities.British Council Malaysia is a branch (995232-A) of the British Council, registered as a charity in England and Wales (209131) and Scotland (SC037733)